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Post  AbyssalVoid Fri Sep 14, 2012 1:16 am

Well yeah, I seem to have found a very very incomplete story that I just wrote in a few minutes a few months ago.
So yeah, I would like some thoughts on it if i should maybe be more detailed on some parts, maybe I should take something out, maybe I should put more in, etc.
I think you all get the idea.
Both positive and negative criticism are welcome in order for me to make the story better!
I never really thought of a name for it, nor decided on the genre. Though, I suppose I should probably categorize it as Fantasy I suppose with a bit of realism in it.
Keep in mind it's only 8 paragraphs so yeah I'd say its only like 2% done. LOL!
Spelling and Grammar aren't really important in this stage of my story as it's only a rough draft.


On the site note: I was doing this while the game was downloading. xD



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Post  Kirv Sat Sep 22, 2012 4:17 pm

VERY long (IMO)
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